Writing T2 W5

Hello, welcome to my blog. For this weeks writing I did narrative writing! Here is my narrative writing link: LINK TO NARRATIVE WRITING

If you want to read it from here then here you go:

Creature from the Deep

“Hellooooo?” said Ronald. The voice was echoing down the never ending staircase. You could see nothing because it was so dark and empty. If you shut the entrance door you wouldn’t be able to find the door ever again. Luckily he had a torch in his safety pocket. He gripped the torch firmly with his palm and fingers. Ronald was sweating and he tried to turn it on. It was hard for him to find the on switch and when Ronald did, it barely didn’t do anything. 

There is literal fog inside the empty place. Ronald saw little circles or dark grey dust moving around like it was an organism. He tried to pick one up with my torch which was useless. It kept on moving around then suddenly. “AHHHHHHHHHHH” He screamed louder than a little girl falling to her doom. 

Ronald was choking on dust, living dust. It was taking over my body and soon I was a Creature. A weird creature. My brain was taken over. So I didn’t know who I was. I roared. It sounded like thunder slicing a tree in half. I had night vision and I was able to see everything. I ran towards the door and smashed it out of my way. The only feeling I had was anger. Black mist was rising from my body. All you could see was a black, dusty and dark body with 2 shining white eyes. 

First of all. I was hungry, so I ate the whole entire house, then I started to expand. So I ate people, and I grew huge. So I ATE THE WHOLE PLANET AND UNIVERSE.

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